Comments on: i need an extra two minutes on my speech about melanoma? can someone read it and help me add anything? http://www.sunclothingblog.com/408/i-need-an-extra-two-minutes-on-my-speech-about-melanoma-can-someone-read-it-and-help-me-add-anything/ Everything about protection from the sun Sat, 19 Nov 2011 03:39:15 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.2 By: dominica http://www.sunclothingblog.com/408/i-need-an-extra-two-minutes-on-my-speech-about-melanoma-can-someone-read-it-and-help-me-add-anything/comment-page-1/#comment-1137 dominica Thu, 02 Jul 2009 04:35:59 +0000 http://www.sunclothingblog.com/408/i-need-an-extra-two-minutes-on-my-speech-about-melanoma-can-someone-read-it-and-help-me-add-anything/#comment-1137 Why don't you contact the Cancer Council and ask about getting some brochures to distribute or go in and they may help with this. It would be good to end it with leaving the class info to look at later. Also they could give you some statistics on teenagers around the classes age that they could relate to. The Cancer Council may give you a poster on the identifying of melanomas and you could use this to stretch out two minutes. You could mention that even if the sun is covered by a cloudy day does not protect you. Why don't you read it out at a normal pace and time it, you may find you have enough. Does this include question time I thought your work was great, and could not see room for improvement. Good luck<br><b>References : </b><br> Why don’t you contact the Cancer Council and ask about getting some brochures to distribute or go in and they may help with this. It would be good to end it with leaving the class info to look at later.
Also they could give you some statistics on teenagers around the classes age that they could relate to.
The Cancer Council may give you a poster on the identifying of melanomas and you could use this to stretch out two minutes.
You could mention that even if the sun is covered by a cloudy day does not protect you.
Why don’t you read it out at a normal pace and time it, you may find you have enough. Does this include question time

I thought your work was great, and could not see room for improvement. Good luck
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]]> By: Amanda101 http://www.sunclothingblog.com/408/i-need-an-extra-two-minutes-on-my-speech-about-melanoma-can-someone-read-it-and-help-me-add-anything/comment-page-1/#comment-1136 Amanda101 Thu, 02 Jul 2009 04:25:59 +0000 http://www.sunclothingblog.com/408/i-need-an-extra-two-minutes-on-my-speech-about-melanoma-can-someone-read-it-and-help-me-add-anything/#comment-1136 Hi, I'm almost seventeen years old and you answered my question - thank you! YOUR SPEECH IS AMAZING!!!!! I love it and you really organized it very well! I love what you added as well and I think you should! You're really on a good roll for presenting your speech. I would add in a few more lines, however it should come from the heart. So, my suggestion to you is to add that bit what you showed us and perhaps more about melanoma and I think you'll be good! Your speech is amazing and I don't want to add anything to your creativity because it's so good. I apologize if I wasn't so useful, however I wish you the best of luck!! - Amanda.<br><b>References : </b><br> Hi, I’m almost seventeen years old and you answered my question – thank you!

YOUR SPEECH IS AMAZING!!!!! I love it and you really organized it very well! I love what you added as well and I think you should! You’re really on a good roll for presenting your speech. I would add in a few more lines, however it should come from the heart. So, my suggestion to you is to add that bit what you showed us and perhaps more about melanoma and I think you’ll be good! Your speech is amazing and I don’t want to add anything to your creativity because it’s so good. I apologize if I wasn’t so useful, however I wish you the best of luck!!

- Amanda.
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]]> By: cynical14ever http://www.sunclothingblog.com/408/i-need-an-extra-two-minutes-on-my-speech-about-melanoma-can-someone-read-it-and-help-me-add-anything/comment-page-1/#comment-1135 cynical14ever Thu, 02 Jul 2009 03:44:59 +0000 http://www.sunclothingblog.com/408/i-need-an-extra-two-minutes-on-my-speech-about-melanoma-can-someone-read-it-and-help-me-add-anything/#comment-1135 Can you use visuals, like a PowerPoint to accompany your speech. If so, not only could you actually show what everyone should look for, but it would also slow you down by at least 2 minutes. Also, if you wrote this speech on your own, for 15, you are an amazing writer. Run it thru spell check, there are just a few minor type-o's. Seriously, I've seen many speeches in my college classes and most are not as well written as yours. Also, practice your speech outloud at home before you give it to your class. This really helped me (even though I felt like a dork). It got me over being nervous. <br><b>References : </b><br> Can you use visuals, like a PowerPoint to accompany your speech. If so, not only could you actually show what everyone should look for, but it would also slow you down by at least 2 minutes.

Also, if you wrote this speech on your own, for 15, you are an amazing writer. Run it thru spell check, there are just a few minor type-o’s. Seriously, I’ve seen many speeches in my college classes and most are not as well written as yours.

Also, practice your speech outloud at home before you give it to your class. This really helped me (even though I felt like a dork). It got me over being nervous.
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